- Why did you choose the different pictures or background(s)?I chose a plain background so that I can make the reader focus on the character or characters instead of the colourful screen behind them. The pictures are big to empathsise on the particular characters (like the Heart).- How do they contribute to the elements (plot, setting, characterization) of your narrative?The fat body shows that I am talking about health or something along that line, which is the theme of this comic. (Setting)The empathsis on the heart shows its determination to keep working despite the fact that it has a lot of difficulty shouldering the burden. (Characterisation)- How did you make use of the different elements to contribute to the theme you have chosen?The plot shows how much the heart wants to give up. This shows that being fat is no good at all, for it will overwork the heart, eventually causing the heart to give way and ultimately leading to one's demise.The determined character of the heart helps to show us that, when we face certain problems and are on the verge of giving up, be like the heart in the comic. The heart also tells us that if we give up, we would cause a chain of other problems to take place, and other people who counted on you would be affected too.
Hi Greg, This is Arnold. I think your comic is interesting! It's kind of cute and funny to me. Your message that you are trying to spread is very clear and easy to understandI.Indeed, we should take care of our own health. Thank you for sharing such an interesting comic! If possible, please comment on my blog too. Thank you!(:
ReplyDeleteHi Gregory, I find your comic quite cute. However, I feel that it is too plain. Perhaps you could add some facial expression to your 'heart'. I mean the 'heart' seems to have the same expression throughout the entire comic. Also you can add some colours to your background to suit the mood.
ReplyDeleteI like your comic. The message about watching your health is very obvious and i agree. not taking care of yourself is only digging your own grave. However, what does the last panel have to do with the message that you are presenting? i feel it would be better if you put that the heart gave up and the guy regretted being unhealthy. anyway, that is my opinion.
ReplyDeleteGood job anyway!